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Hallo, ich wollte euch meinen ersten Songtext präsentieren und um Feedback fragen, Sachen die ich besser machen kann und evtl auch Techniken zum texten. Herzlichen Dank.
Name: A Psychopath's Game
[Intro]
No chance to hide for you
No way to live for you
No possibility to escape the game.
[/Intro]
Returning from church the weather was fine
Sunset, in my back I can feel it shine
In thoughts of relaxing it began to rain
No idea why I felt like a man in chain
Suddenly I heard that voice
And -LACERATING- there was no choice
But fellowship
And what I saw falling from the sky
Was the blood of those who died
As I hear the words "REIGN FOR ETERNITY";
I see pictures of myself IN A SLAUGHTER ENDLESSLY
While they all try to -DEAD WARM MEAT- kill me
I am not about to show any kind of mercy
That they're not to deserve
What is the glow at the end of the road I'm walking
And why do I feel -SLAYER- those shadows stalking?
I can't fucking kill them, no way to fucking hang
I wanna butch them, this dead-dedicated gang!
The sun begins melting the place
And I turn inside all my fantasy
Lost in my mind the rain turned blood
What am I doing?
Are all these corpses I see my work?
But who is this man watching me from the mirror?
I don't just see me bunched allover in blood
There is a shape of a man while he laughs
What is he laughing about?
Breaking the glass of that mirror I saw my hand
All that blood flooding from it did not hurt
But I hate this hand
Seeing the knife before me the hand was falling to the ground
This tasty flesh of my legs disappeared into my mouth
And as I ripped the last piece of flesh apart from me
The laughter sounds and says:
It was me, the game is played
This is your end I hope you enjoyed
Achja, und nochwas: Ich komm nie auf ein Thema, weiß da jemand Abhilfe?
Name: A Psychopath's Game
[Intro]
No chance to hide for you
No way to live for you
No possibility to escape the game.
[/Intro]
Returning from church the weather was fine
Sunset, in my back I can feel it shine
In thoughts of relaxing it began to rain
No idea why I felt like a man in chain
Suddenly I heard that voice
And -LACERATING- there was no choice
But fellowship
And what I saw falling from the sky
Was the blood of those who died
As I hear the words "REIGN FOR ETERNITY";
I see pictures of myself IN A SLAUGHTER ENDLESSLY
While they all try to -DEAD WARM MEAT- kill me
I am not about to show any kind of mercy
That they're not to deserve
What is the glow at the end of the road I'm walking
And why do I feel -SLAYER- those shadows stalking?
I can't fucking kill them, no way to fucking hang
I wanna butch them, this dead-dedicated gang!
The sun begins melting the place
And I turn inside all my fantasy
Lost in my mind the rain turned blood
What am I doing?
Are all these corpses I see my work?
But who is this man watching me from the mirror?
I don't just see me bunched allover in blood
There is a shape of a man while he laughs
What is he laughing about?
Breaking the glass of that mirror I saw my hand
All that blood flooding from it did not hurt
But I hate this hand
Seeing the knife before me the hand was falling to the ground
This tasty flesh of my legs disappeared into my mouth
And as I ripped the last piece of flesh apart from me
The laughter sounds and says:
It was me, the game is played
This is your end I hope you enjoyed
Achja, und nochwas: Ich komm nie auf ein Thema, weiß da jemand Abhilfe?
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