Hallo! Ich habe neulich einen Song in Englisch geschrieben und da mein Englisch leider nicht so gut ist würde ich jemanden der sehr gut Englisch kann bitten Grammatik- und Rechtschreibfehler zu suchen und die Fehler mir dann ausbessern. Könnt ihr dann bitte auch eure Meinung abgeben wie euch der Text gefällt? Es wird eine Rock/Pop Melodie dazugespielt Danke schonmal im voraus. PS: Der Song hat ein bischen einen schnulzigen Text. Hier ist er: Strophe 1: It's a long time I've seen you last. The time indeed bent on the fly by. Yes but now we have again seen I have missed you very much But at some point because I had to let go. For I knew I would never see you again. And it would be gone forever. I need to understand and realize that you simply do not want me anymore Yes because you said I'm a ass. Refrain: We went our ways, you we really thought. I'm 15 years only, to you And I was really shitty 15 years, because I could not see you anymore but I must understand and understand Do not you want me you do not want me Strophe 2: Suddenly we met, and we knew immediately. I can not really grasp it, we are after so many years again see us. She was still as beautiful as before, and still had the merry merry glance and her long beautiful brown hair, made a mad Yes and then she said to me, I'm the cool guy always and at that moment I had hope again, .she has always missed me, has missed. Bridge: I want them She wants me, I can not believe it, It really happened We are back together After so many years And now here we are And look at us And then we kiss.