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[reggaefan97]

America
Oh my America
So near in my dreams,
So far in reality
I'll ride you till' the day of my death

Oh you wonderful America
If you just would bei mine
I would take you everyday for a walk,
Across Highway 99
Down South Colorado

America
Oh my America
So near in my dreams,
So far in reality
I'll ride you till' the day of my death

Sittin' on your black leather seat
Behind me the Girl of My Dreams
Ridin' down to nowhere
On such a wonderful machine
In the endless Highways of America

America
Oh my America
So near in my dreams,
So far in reality
I'll ride you till' the day of my death
On the endless Highways of America
I'll ride you till' death

copyright 2011 by Jakub Krolikowski

So mal der anfang mit dem lied America, hab ich über n Motorrad geschriebn

bald folgen weitere

 

[wilbour-cobb]

Across Highway 99

Der Highway 99 führt von Kanada nach Mexico und heisst heute erstens anders und führt definitv nicht nach Colorado.

I'll ride you till' the day of my death

Und hier zu einfach nur "wow"!

Der restliche Text ist stellenweise in recht unsauberem Englisch geschrieben, insgesamt ist der Ausdruck eher monoton.

 

[reggaefan97]

highway 99 : hab ich genommen weil es sich auf mine reimt

des unsaubere englisch ist abischt^^

edit :

nächste lieder

The darkness of the night, you're standing there
With me by your side
Keepin' on smiling
Don't thinking 'bout tomorrow,
Just two figures in the rain
Why don't we take the night train
Drivin' through the deep dark barking forests
We're gettin' wet,
But fuck 'bout it and keep on smilin' honey
Don't care 'bout money, don't care 'bout tomorrow
Just two figures in the rain
Days with you makin' me happy
But I've no more got you now
Don't know how,
Can't just live without you sugar ...
No more figures in the rain,
No more life in my heart
Memories I can't forget,
Just 'bout two figures in the rain
And all these shit,
It's just my fault
Just did everythin' wrong
Not strong anymore
Without you by my side honey
I just can't keep livin' on
Keepin' dreamin,
'Bout you
'Till the day of my death
My angel, you left me
Now life lefts me ...

----

We've been together sometime
But I destroyed it all somewhile
Now I've got You back on me
And I won't ever let You go 'way from me
Don't let me go
Never let me alone
And I'll standy by your side
In good and hard times I will love you
And please, please don't you ever let me go
And I won't disappear from your side
Even when everybody'll turns 'way from You, I'll be there for you
Just to see your smile another time
And I won't let you go
If you'll let me be your man
I'll do everythin' for you
And don't you ever let me know,
That you want me to leave you alone
And your wonderful blue smiled eyes won't lose tears
That we cried for us
In hard times
Are over now
And we've got happy together,
'd nothing will destroy it
Nobody'll mistreat you
If you don't let me go


----
Im walkin' down this street
I don't know
Where it will guide me
But I know
I need to go
Even if I must walk through the flames of hell
I will keep on going
On this street
I must keep on going
Through the deep shadows of the night
I will keep on fighting
Against the hate in this world
And nobody will stop me
Nobody can stop me now
I see this big black cloud of hate
Its getting bigger and bigger
The nigger says
Nobody can stop me now
I know how
The rain of hate
Won't come down
This street
Guides me to nowhere
Now
You're here
And I'm nowhere
The rain
Comes down
The pain
Keeps getting bigger
The people
Walk on the street
It guides them to nowhere
Just like me

 

[antipasti]

highway 99 : hab ich genommen weil es sich auf mine reimt

des unsaubere englisch ist abischt^^

Sorry: c l o s e d.

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