hier fehlen ne ganze Menge kleine Wörter und ich weiß nich ob es überhaupt möglich ist die wegzulassen, aber ich habs jetzt einfach mal gemacht, weil ich ne Rhythmik im Kopf hab.....ansonsten bin ich mir auch nicht immer sicher über die qualität meiner englischen Sprache....*g*... ich brauche Hiiiiilfe durch kommentare.... ___________________________________________ Seeling pride to you like gold, many weeks and days I did, got my price for what I'v sold, after time passed I lost it. No more pride is left for me, keeping feelings deep inside, afraid of loosing what we'll be, when there's nothing left of me. But we're nothing more than tears, shouts and lies trough desperate hope, day and night living with fears, what will help trying to cope. Cope with guilt you've burdened me, lost my heart in your brown eyes, you never tried to find a way to see, it could be wrong to choose despise. [Hier müsste ja eigentlich ein "to" vor das "despise"...aber dann is die Rhythmik futsch...wie mach ich es besser??? Hab keine Idee...] Ref) My love just starved in all your vain, I never saw a reason for this pain you said you were prisoned in my chain, guess loving you was damn insane. Told me that I made us fail, we tried to walk another way, but nothing helped to cause avail, no reason left for me to stay. You might have been the one for me, the dream I once saw right in you, but I was never ment to be, the right and suited one for you. There is nothing left for us, mistaken we both feel so sad, I know it might seem for you careless, but I won't try savings things we've had. All my plans out of my mind, all our dreams and hopes are dead, pieces of my love in every kind, have to find the way out of my head.