Gerousis
Registrierter Benutzer
Servus folks,
Wir (Fiasco Befalls, Münchner Metalcore) gehen in 2 Wochen ins Studio und ich suche ein paar nete Menschen die die Texte nach Fehlern durchforsten. An sich denke ich (hoffe ich) dass das Englisch schon recht gut ist, aber es gibt eben oft sachen die man einfach nicht so sagen kann. Da ich keinen Native Speaker kenne, post ichs hier rein :]
Danke im Voraus
Simon
Cloudburst
aloft I can see the vultures making their lanes
approaching, slowly but surely
they can smell our desiccated bodies, groaning
with harm
we leech on to the things, which last for us
hoping diffidently for better times
telling self-pitying stories, doubted even by ourselves
building frameworks of lies,
only to fit into a scheme
oh, we come to realise
we all live in a never-ending period of drought
drooling over the saving rainfall
begging for the flood
as you bury your sorrows in the desert sand
you count on the fact,
that that what yesterday ran dry
could today be an ocean
like a cloudburst
this all will be washed away
day turns to night,
as the sky opens up
Devoured by Dormancy
Let's set about this
it's time to roll up our sleeves
with thousands in our back and the hand clenched to a fist
in a world where the next trap could lurk behind every stone
in a world where it swarms with selfish men
in a world which is a ticking time bomb
in a world where avarice prevails
Let's make use of the time we've been given
to create something that is of avail
like a plague it spreads, this wave of dormancy
awake by this siren, the times of idleness are gone
spread the word and let the ground shaking
when we bang the drums
making aware is the first step towards recovery
blindfolded we crawl over this putrid place
and it's our duty to heal it's wounds
it's our duty to heal it's
in a world
which gets devoured by dormancy
Veil of Disguise
Scarlet was the sky,
and scarlet was the rising sun
as we fought this hopeless fight
I wear these scars like medals
without shame i can look back
every action draws conclusions with it
but when we start to regret
start trying to prevent every loss
the spirit that makes us live will escape
beasts escape their kennels
and nothing will hold them back
abandoned, armed only with the night sky
where are the lights to guide us home?
A veil of disguise surrounds everyone of us
Reduced to the core
we're naked, honest, pure
abandoned, armed only with the night sky
no lights in sight to guide us home
This is a battleground (This is a battleground)
in which our weapons are falsehood and affection
Leave this for the buried
the irrality of reality
completely incomplete
leave this for the buried, this world shall disappear in dawn [also in Morgenröte untergehen, da bin ich mir nicht sicher)
Into the Maelstrom
dizzy
was how I felt this times and
no one was there to hold me!
A dense fog encircles my mind
Too much things that happen contemporaneously
In times like these
life seems to be one big maelstrom
But in the middle of this
there is a windless place
and this eye of the storm is you
So back me up to stem this maelstrom
back me up!
And eras come and go but there is something that remains
something that remains
take all my possession, take everything I've got
I have everything I need
For you're a rock in the surf
the ones who cast out my ghosts
a wall to protect
the ones who clear the fog
so back me up to stand strong
Resilience
tired, jaded and languid
shoeless and with broken bones
I trudge along, so cumbrous
there's just one thing I know
there is no turning back
hand in hand we'll walk this path unto it's end
this path we took ages ago
once zealous, now we toil
but we are willing to shoulder the drudgery
I will reach the summit
within or beyond of hope or hopelessness
I swear this to the fallen
no one said this would be easy
the way that lies ahead of us
when every step feels like a life task
when every pebble seems to be insuperable
when you can't see your hand in front of your face
when you realise you're always in search
in spheres of permanent darkness
it's up to us to find a source of light
as all virtues fall
resilience is the one
to pull us through
everything that lies ahead of us will be defeated
barriers will be overrun
will you transcend the wafts of mist [Nebelschwaden richtig so?]
will you transcend the wafts
I trudge along with bleeding feet
Kritik natürlich auch erwünscht :]
Wir (Fiasco Befalls, Münchner Metalcore) gehen in 2 Wochen ins Studio und ich suche ein paar nete Menschen die die Texte nach Fehlern durchforsten. An sich denke ich (hoffe ich) dass das Englisch schon recht gut ist, aber es gibt eben oft sachen die man einfach nicht so sagen kann. Da ich keinen Native Speaker kenne, post ichs hier rein :]
Danke im Voraus
Simon
Cloudburst
aloft I can see the vultures making their lanes
approaching, slowly but surely
they can smell our desiccated bodies, groaning
with harm
we leech on to the things, which last for us
hoping diffidently for better times
telling self-pitying stories, doubted even by ourselves
building frameworks of lies,
only to fit into a scheme
oh, we come to realise
we all live in a never-ending period of drought
drooling over the saving rainfall
begging for the flood
as you bury your sorrows in the desert sand
you count on the fact,
that that what yesterday ran dry
could today be an ocean
like a cloudburst
this all will be washed away
day turns to night,
as the sky opens up
Devoured by Dormancy
Let's set about this
it's time to roll up our sleeves
with thousands in our back and the hand clenched to a fist
in a world where the next trap could lurk behind every stone
in a world where it swarms with selfish men
in a world which is a ticking time bomb
in a world where avarice prevails
Let's make use of the time we've been given
to create something that is of avail
like a plague it spreads, this wave of dormancy
awake by this siren, the times of idleness are gone
spread the word and let the ground shaking
when we bang the drums
making aware is the first step towards recovery
blindfolded we crawl over this putrid place
and it's our duty to heal it's wounds
it's our duty to heal it's
in a world
which gets devoured by dormancy
Veil of Disguise
Scarlet was the sky,
and scarlet was the rising sun
as we fought this hopeless fight
I wear these scars like medals
without shame i can look back
every action draws conclusions with it
but when we start to regret
start trying to prevent every loss
the spirit that makes us live will escape
beasts escape their kennels
and nothing will hold them back
abandoned, armed only with the night sky
where are the lights to guide us home?
A veil of disguise surrounds everyone of us
Reduced to the core
we're naked, honest, pure
abandoned, armed only with the night sky
no lights in sight to guide us home
This is a battleground (This is a battleground)
in which our weapons are falsehood and affection
Leave this for the buried
the irrality of reality
completely incomplete
leave this for the buried, this world shall disappear in dawn [also in Morgenröte untergehen, da bin ich mir nicht sicher)
Into the Maelstrom
dizzy
was how I felt this times and
no one was there to hold me!
A dense fog encircles my mind
Too much things that happen contemporaneously
In times like these
life seems to be one big maelstrom
But in the middle of this
there is a windless place
and this eye of the storm is you
So back me up to stem this maelstrom
back me up!
And eras come and go but there is something that remains
something that remains
take all my possession, take everything I've got
I have everything I need
For you're a rock in the surf
the ones who cast out my ghosts
a wall to protect
the ones who clear the fog
so back me up to stand strong
Resilience
tired, jaded and languid
shoeless and with broken bones
I trudge along, so cumbrous
there's just one thing I know
there is no turning back
hand in hand we'll walk this path unto it's end
this path we took ages ago
once zealous, now we toil
but we are willing to shoulder the drudgery
I will reach the summit
within or beyond of hope or hopelessness
I swear this to the fallen
no one said this would be easy
the way that lies ahead of us
when every step feels like a life task
when every pebble seems to be insuperable
when you can't see your hand in front of your face
when you realise you're always in search
in spheres of permanent darkness
it's up to us to find a source of light
as all virtues fall
resilience is the one
to pull us through
everything that lies ahead of us will be defeated
barriers will be overrun
will you transcend the wafts of mist [Nebelschwaden richtig so?]
will you transcend the wafts
I trudge along with bleeding feet
Kritik natürlich auch erwünscht :]
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