Ready

[TRommelman]

My son let me tell you a story
Daddy was never here
The guy you know just looks like him
The former dad died without glory

He tried to reinvent
The world’s inner circle
Human could not act like
He meant them to

Walls of rejection
Growed much thicker
Oh, son let me tell you
They excluded new perceptions

Refrain:
But you, my son
You are daddys son
Try to deliver his world
When they are ready!
Oohhh….ready….ready to know…..yeah…ready to feel

Now daddy is dead
Killed by words
You can’t reanimate him
His ideas are still there

Spread out his words
Tell them of his existence
Make it last
Don’t make it worse

 

[desgraca]

My son let me tell you a story
Daddy was never here
The guy you know just looks like him
The former dad died without glory
besser :the dad who was before died without glory
the dad i was before died without glory

He tried to reinvent
The world’s inner circle
Human could not act like
humans couldn't act the way
he wanted them to
He meant them to

Walls of rejection
Growed much thicker
grew
Oh, son let me tell you
They excluded new perceptions

Refrain:
But you, my son
You are daddy's son
Try to deliver his world
hm. pass his word...irgendsowas....fulfil his destiny,,,,preach his dream
When they are ready!
Oohhh….ready….ready to know…..yeah…ready to feel

Now daddy is dead
Killed by words
You can’t reanimate him
lieber: bring him back to life
His ideas are still there
still here

Spread out his words
-out
Tell them of his existence
Make it last
Don’t make it worse

 

[x-Riff]

Ich hatte ja schon gestern oder vorgestern im Chat was über den text gesagt und brings hier mal zu - äh - Papier (?):

Mir ist er ein bißchen zu allgemein, vor allem aber zu langgestreckt - etliche Zeilen drehen sich nur um den Fakt, dass er halt seinen daddy nicht kennt - aber was das bedeutet, wie das auf ihn wirkt etc. - darüber wird kein Wort verloren.

Dann kommt raus, dass sein Daddy offensichtlich eine Botschaft für ihn hat, aber über diese wird auch nichts weiter gesagt.

Eigentlich ein total tolles Thema: wozu bin ich auf der Welt und was soll ich bewirken einerseits - andererseits: in welche Fußstapfen trete ich, was ist mir davon bewußt und nehme ich sozusagen einen Auftrag an (führe das weiter, was ich begonnen habe ...).

Auch sehr klasse, das an einem Vater festzumachen, den man nicht kennengelernt hat und der nur durch Erzählungen, vielleicht sogar Mythen existiert.

Also da steckt so viel in dieser Idee und Konstellation drin, da könnte man mehr rausholen finde ich.
Wert wär´s das jedenfalls ...

Yo - das wären so meine 3,5 Cent.

x-Riff

 

[TRommelman]

My son let me tell you a story
Daddy was never here
The guy you know just looks like him
The former dad died without glory

He tried to reinvent
The world's inner circle
Human could not act the way
He wanted them to

He said take care of the world
And they don't
He said only then you can live on
And they won't

Walls of rejection
Grew much thicker
Oh, son let me tell you
They excluded new perceptions

Refrain:
But you, my son
You are daddy's son
Try to pass his words
When they are ready!
Oohhh….ready….ready to know…..yeah…ready to feel

I know you're alone
But his soul is carried by his words
Speak it, live it
And you're going to be ….free

 

[x-Riff]

Bei dieser Stelle denke ich hauen die Zeiten nicht hin:
He said take care of the world
And they don't
and/but they didn´t
He said only then you can live on
And they won't
and/but they didn´t want to, imho

x-Riff

 

[desgraca]

war trommel derjenige, der immer neue versionen gepostet hat, und dabei die verbesserungen ignoriert?

 

[TRommelman]

war trommel derjenige, der immer neue versionen gepostet hat, und dabei die verbesserungen ignoriert?

Naja, eine...

 

[desgraca]

kann auch sein, nach der ersten hab ich nimmer weitergelesen