embryo inside

von Dai, 14.03.07.

  1. Dai

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    Also..vorerst Mal das letzte XD Ich gehe mir schon selbst auf die Nerven ö__o Aber das will Dai noch loswerden bevor sie auf Tauchstation geht... :3
    Ist schon älter ehrlich gesagt und etwas.. naja eigentlich nicht, aber meine Mutter nannte es Morbid. Naja. Jedem das seine. o-o...genaa~u..Ja.
    Also die idee kam zu stande nachdem wir in Bio ein Embryo betrachtet haben.. in so einem glasdingenz...
    Daher der Innhalt XD




    the little one is sleeping to never awaken, are you having a nice dream?
    the unborn life inside the beloved mother, what could you look like?
    someone asking unnecessary questions when you'll sleep forever
    a precious life is all a waste, you'll die before you even life, baibai (*note I know it’s a misspelling)

    so hear me though you're floating in the deep, buried inside a memory
    the waves of the white ocean will sing you into a deep sleep once more
    the embryo is now resting in the timeless safety where no one lives
    dreamless? what's going on behind the yet so unformed eyes of you?

    misunderstood creature buried inside the birth of your wounded mind
    after saying something is the last time there’s still one falling back, right?
    and after that lost becomes lost, alive becomes alive once more
    in hatred, closing what could have been ears you ignore the calling

    [seconds were years...days finally became endless....]

    so hear me though you're loathing in the deep, buried inside a trash can
    the waves of the white ocean are everything you could recall 'til now
    the embryo is now resting in the dark, waiting to become ashes tomorrow
    dreamless? what was going on behind the yet so unformed eyes of you?

    don't be sad little dear... the hypocrites of society never had a chance to reach you...
    your cries were never heard by anyone

    goodbye to you, strange world outside of my closed eyes
    feel better now when you finally defeated me, bye dear existence
    goodbye dear addiction, live and stay strong mother
    bye bye beloved warmth, in hatred you finally abused me
    goodbye to all that once could have been me

    *bows* Bye bye
     
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    Erstellt: 15.03.07   #2
    wehe du bist nur eine parasitin die ihre texte hier ablädt, und sich dann nie mehr blicken lässt:twisted:

    so, nun ich der erste, jaaaaaaaaaaaa.

    the little one is sleeping to never awaken, are you having a nice dream?
    the unborn life inside the beloved mother, what could you look like?
    someone's asking unnecessary questions when you'll sleep forever
    a precious life is all a waste, you'll die before you even live, baibai (*note I know it’s a misspelling)
    before you've ever been alive?

    so hear me though you're floating in the deep, buried inside a memory :) wow
    the waves of the white ocean will sing you into a deep sleep once more
    the embryo is resting now in the timeless safety where no one lives
    dreamless? what's going on behind the yet so unformed eyes of you?

    misunderstood creature buried inside the birth of your wounded mind yaaaa, solche sätze mag ich, da staun ich nur:)
    after saying something is the last time there’s still one falling back, right? WAS? versteh ich nich
    and after that lost becomes lost, alive becomes alive once more
    in hatred, closing what could have been ears you ignore the calling
    abgesehn von der ersten zeile versteh ich hier nichts:(

    [seconds were years...days finally became endless....]

    so hear me though you're loathing in the deep, buried inside a trash can
    the waves of the white ocean are everything you could recall 'til now ?? you could recall until now? was meinst du damit?
    the embryo is now resting in the dark, waiting to become ashes tomorrow
    the embryo is resting now in the dark, ashes to ashes, dust to dust
    dreamless? what was going on behind the yet so unformed eyes of you?

    don't be sad little dear... the hypocrites of society never had a chance to reach you...
    your cries were never heard by anyone

    goodbye to you, strange world outside of my closed eyes
    feel better now when you finally defeated me, bye dear existence
    goodbye dear addiction, live and stay strong mother
    bye bye beloved warmth, in hatred you finally abused me
    goodbye to all that once could have been me

    WOWOWOWOW; der schluss ist der hammer!!! der schluss rettet alles. boa, hammer schluss! ansonsten ist's nicht ganz so 'flüssig und bezaubernd' wie zB. amber, aber das liegt vileicht auch dran das ich mich shon ein bisschen dran gewöhnt habe=) mag deine texte, wirklich:)

    ansonsten, ja habe ich nicht viel schlaues gesagt;D ausser das ashes to ashes, dust to dust, das würdich unbedingt übernehmen:)

    hoffe konnte bisschen helfen, der grauen schulmaus:D :p
     
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    Erstellt: 15.03.07   #3
    Ich mache auch mal ein paar Anmerkungen.
    Warum nimmst Du eigentlich immer so eine kleine Schriftgröße? Ich bekomme immer Augenschmerzen, wenn ich Deine Texte lese ...

    embryo inside

    the little one is sleeping to never awaken, are you having a nice dream?
    vlt.: never to awake oder never to be awaken
    the unborn life inside the beloved mother, what could you look like?
    someone asking unnecessary questions when you'll sleep forever
    evtl: while statt when - und warum you`ll sleep forever? warum nicht while you sleep forever bzw. while you´re sleeping forever
    a precious life is all a waste, you'll die before you even life, baibai (*note I know it's a misspelling)
    again: warum you´ll die statt you died before you lived/had the chance to live?
    so hear me though you're floating in the deep, buried inside a memory
    the waves of the white ocean will sing you into a deep sleep once more
    vlt: will lullaby you into a deep sleep (obwohl ich lullaby als verb nicht gefunden habe)
    the embryo is now resting in the timeless safety where no one lives
    dreamless? what's going on behind the yet so unformed eyes of you?

    misunderstood creature buried inside the birth of your wounded mind
    after saying something is the last time there's still one falling back, right?
    and after that lost becomes lost, alive becomes alive once more
    in hatred, closing what could have been ears you ignore the calling
    ich glaube Ohren kann man nicht schließen

    [seconds were years...days finally became endless....]

    so hear me though you're loathing in the deep, buried inside a trash can
    the waves of the white ocean are everything you could recall 'til now
    the embryo is now resting in the dark, waiting to become ashes tomorrow
    dreamless? what was going on behind the yet so unformed eyes of you?

    don't be sad little dear... the hypocrites of society never had a chance to reach you...
    your cries were never heard by anyone

    goodbye to you, strange world outside of my closed eyes
    feel better now when you finally defeated me, bye dear existence
    goodbye dear addiction, live and stay strong mother
    bye bye beloved warmth, in hatred you finally abused me
    goodbye to all that once could have been me


    Gefällt mir sehr gut, Dein morbider Text.

    x-Riff
     
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