Revolution

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Heißt auch eigentlich fingerprint, aber er sieht wie ein barcode. aus

So, hier noch einmal die fast finale Version (mit ein paar weiteren kleinen Änderungen):

Revolution

VerseI:
There's something happening these days
and I'll be part whatever it takes. I´ll be part - da fehlt glaube ich was. and I´ll be a part of it whatever it takes
Revolution's coming up, I'll push it through,
I'm on safe ground but ...what about you?

Chorus:
Attention, it's time, get closer to see,
I'm no longer what you want me to be,
come on, move nearer, face the truth:
You lied to yourself while I stayed smooth.

VerseII:
That's the situation: I'm with a girl
and no one around here can compete with her,
but that doesn't fit in what you did create,
I'm a fucking stupid kid so this must be fake.

VerseIII:
But it's not and now I laugh about the faces,
the expression on them when they heared what her age is expression on them kommt mir komisch vor, vlt: and what they express by hearing what her age is
I know that's tough but now listen carefully:
she's perfect in both character and symmetry.

Chorus:
And so it's time, get closer to see,
I'm no longer what you want me to be.
Come on, move nearer, face the truth:
You lied to yourself while I stayed smooth!

Coda:
We stick together no matter what's your game
'cuz we're like twins in mind , exactly the same
And especially we are not what you want us to be!

Hab mir auch schon Gedanken über die Umsetzung gemacht. Wird wahrscheinlich ein bisschen härter, vielleicht ähnlich wie Songs von Exilia.

Schön - hat sich doch gelohnt.

Und stell mal den song rein, wenn er fertig ist.

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[StayTuned]

absolut X's Meinung.

Die beiden Stellen würde ich auch noch ändern. Ansonsten ein sehr geiler Text geworden!
Greetz

 

[nonickforme]

Yay, thx!

Werde ihn reinstellen, sobald ich irgendwo ein Mikro herbekomme...

VerseIII:
But it's not and now I laugh about the faces,
the expression on them when they heared what her age is expression on them kommt mir komisch vor, vlt: and what they express by hearing what her age is

Mh, was haltet ihr von incredulous expressions by hearing what her age is?

 

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Mh, was haltet ihr von incredulous expressions by hearing what her age is?

Sehr gut.

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[nonickforme]

Ok, here comes the final:

Revolution

VerseI:
There's something happening these days
and I'll be part of it whatever it takes.
Revolution's coming up, I'll push it through,
I'm on safe ground but ...what about you?

Chorus:
Attention, it's time, get closer to see,
I'm no longer what you want me to be,
come on, move nearer, face the truth:
You lied to yourself while I stood smooth.

VerseII:
That's the situation: I'm with a girl
and no one around here can compete with her,
but that doesn't fit in what you did create,
I'm a fucking stupid kid so this must be fake.

VerseIII:
But it's not and now I laugh about the faces,
incredulous expressions by hearing what her age is
I know that's tough but now listen carefully:
she's perfect in both character and symmetry.

Chorus:
And so it's time, get closer to see,
I'm no longer what you want me to be.
Come on, move nearer, face the truth:
You lied to yourself while I stood smooth!

Coda:
We stick together no matter what's your game
'cuz we're like twins in mind , exactly the same
And especially we are not what you want us to be!

Nochmal danke an euch zwei!
Gruß, SN

[EDIT] Siehe nächsten Post

 

[StayTuned]

kleinigkeit

You lied to yourself while I stayed smooth.

stood smooth

incredulous expressions by hearing what her age is

ziemlich geil

Hau rein...

 

[nonickforme]

Alles klar!

 

[conan660]

Das Thema gefällt mir echt gut!!!

Ich hätte einen Vorschlag für den 2. Verse 2. Zeile:
And no one around is a match for her
Niemand hier ist ihr gewachsen